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Sustainability Driven Innovation

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Case 1: John Q Student (Overall: 90/100)
Your Original Case Post Your Response
 Ideas and Application 

28/30

Excellent idea for the expansion of the case material and introduction of a beautifully fit concept.

9.5/10

Well-founded contrarian response to Jane's points, and well-synthesized ideation.

Clarity

13/15

Clear and succinct writing in general; a few points were not entirely explained.

4/5

A little vague at points.

Support

14.5/15

Excellent use of original resources to substantiate, tightly researched.

4.5/5

Well supported citations.

Style

13/15

Very approachable overall, and generated robust follow-up discussions with peers.

3.5/5

A few grammatical errors took away from the reading.

Overall: I enjoyed your side analysis of Tesla's constraints in growth and practical concerns for innovation. For next time, I would recommend relying more on available research to underscore your points of comparison to more conventional automakers. Your use of process tools has progressed significantly in the past three weeks.